Nickname:Bud Edward Country:Christmas Island City:Dreamland State: Gender:Male Age:28 Member Since:Sep 29, 2007 Last Login:Sep 29, 2009 Poems Submitted:25 Poem Comments:117 Poem Views:1,698 Member Comments:15
You have the right idea there. Don't be anyone's fool. Good men get taken advantage of, so you need to do ust what you are saying here. I agree completely. Without respect, there's no love. I like these piece a lot. First one like it I have seen, and I think your message is good. People sometimes don't know what they've got till it's gone.
Wow, this write has style. There's a lot going on in this piece but it is so smooth, I just want to relax and enjoy the ride. Perfect choice of words.
Commented on the poem "The Beast" on 02/05/09 at 11:38 AM
I might be wrong, but I think I understand the type of politics you're talking about here, and maybe even who the beast is. I guess it can mean different things to different people, but to me this piece really seems to speak about manipulation in the form of hope and change, making people into pawns with more of the same oppression and murder. I think it is really powerful, what you have written.
Wow... I can really relate to this piece somehow... I think the last part is what speaks to me the most. "I live to dream, And I dream to hide". I've felt exactly like that, but never put it into words. From reading this it also makes me wonder what the nightmare was. I hope your dreams are not so troubled lately.
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Commented on the poem "Mr. Morales" on 02/05/09 at 11:58 AM
