Nickname:ButterflyDream Country:Bermuda City:the land of butterflies State:triangle Gender:Female Age:28 Member Since:Aug 20, 2008 Last Login:Nov 07, 2009 Poems Submitted:197 Poem Comments:1,977 Poem Views:14,408 Member Comments:1,130
your creative metaphors and the raw hunger from your pen is what does it for me...the more you write and grow...your ink.. wow is going to be so leathal.When I look at my writing before joinin this site and now I see such growth and I think youll see that in urself as well.I enjoyrd this,wonderful job:)
Commented on the poem "I Don't Believe" on 11/07/09 at 12:55 AM
this is potent ugliness spewed from your pen...such rawness.Unthought,leakage...I like it.
Commented on the poem "Regulate Intake" on 11/07/09 at 12:52 AM
I like this because of the rawness..the vunerability of revealing ones flaws.nicely done.
Commented on the poem "Yes its No" on 11/07/09 at 12:47 AM
Lyrically,short and sweet but it says so much.If its not yes its no...that line pulled me in.