Definately a difficult situation. This is real life writing. Keep it up.
Commented on the poem "Part of Both" on 05/16/08 at 11:44 PM
This haiku is so charming...makes me smile. The style makes the concept all the more intriguing. Good job.
Commented on the poem "HOT STEEL RAIN" on 05/16/08 at 11:36 PM
Very original. I must also say it's very very timely given current world events and a different perspective from what we usually hear in this country. I really like the symbology of "concrete maze." Well done and thought provoking.