Commented on the poem "So Much Pain" on 04/30/08 at 08:19 PM
I feel u ma..Like on da realz..Im feelin like 95% of dis poem ri bout now..Im likin how u touch a nerve wit like every oda line...U did a gud job ma..We gon b ite eventually
Commented on the poem "I am, Who?" on 04/30/08 at 07:41 PM
Pray ma..Prayer can get u thru n-e-thn....Guess u got sum soul searchn 2 do..
Yooo..Datz not poppin ma..On da real..Itz cool u releasn deze feelnz instead of suppressn em but dun follow thru, u nah meen?..Im sure most ppl feel like dyin at sum point in dere life but thingz can onli get betta once u get past dat.....Dis wuz a cool write..Emotion wuz apparent...Stay safe ma..ily yo....Pray
Gud job ma..Da vizual wuz nutzo..N farealz yo..Life aint a game..Itz bigger den we think....I c u still got ur signature flow....Dis wuz a nice 1 ma..Vivid imagry
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Commented on the poem "So Much Pain" on 04/30/08 at 08:19 PM
