this is A nice write most def but the transition between you two was rough like to me like it went from poem to story poem story but it all in all was cool
much love to this, this is nicd straight to the point hitin them marks on the nose I loved the write yup yup ten starz
Commented on the poem "because" on 09/11/07 at 09:21 PM
much love to this poem however this is too hhas something special and and tht poem says it to the fullest ten stars most defeated
Commented on the poem "BE ME" on 09/11/07 at 08:56 PM
much love to this piece I likes this a lot that is the shit "be me" this is a fav trust and believe keep up with the writing ill be on the look out for more that was hott
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