...Dude...lol. Take it easy, feeln the storyline. I HOPE you know better! Sometimes we as writers just TELL the story not GO THRU it!lol Good write though, mos def a goodie!
That was serious my dude... My goodness!!! Yo, dynamic storyline. You had me holding on for you next view of how life is for you at least. I can remember thinking some of the same things...my fav line="New people, new places, old feelings new faces"...such is life! 10 STARS!
Commented on the poem "Drug Addiction" on 03/03/08 at 06:48 PM
...RIDICULOUS!!! I love the topic and although it has been done before...I can sooo relate to the analogies!!! MAH MAN!!