Love this poem. It really hits home. and makes me want some hot chocolate. haha
Commented on the poem "CUT" on 07/29/09 at 06:51 PM
great right. Loved the part, "by your abuse, indifference, and close-mindedness." I think that people tend to ignore indifference and close-mindedness as forms of abuse. Great write.
Commented on the poem "Just Take It" on 07/29/09 at 06:46 PM
I like the format of this poem, and the way you layed it out. Good write, thanks for sharing
Commented on the poem "Echoes........." on 07/29/09 at 06:15 PM
good write. i really like the delivery of this poem.
Commented on the poem "Self Meditation" on 07/22/09 at 05:19 PM
I love simple to the point writes. and i love the back ground of the thinker, haha. Good write