Nickname:David Wilson Country:United States City:Chicago State:IL Gender:Male Age:42 Member Since:Feb 28, 2008 Last Login:Nov 08, 2008 Poems Submitted:23 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:131 Poem Views:1,231 Member Comments:27
Bruh.... This was great... Life in a file... gotta love it... you are truly proving yourself to be a very talented poet... Very deep and thought provoking writes...
Dude continue doing your thing... God's works though your hand...
keep the pen flowing
Peace and Love
bruh... this is such a powerful piece... "How about the Mustard Tree
Which begins as the smallest seed
And blossoms into one of the largest trees
That represents the magnitude of how man believes
And tease fear by building faith that relieves
The once bound to become free" and this here is just great... I love it the mustard tree symbolizes so much....
Keep the pen flowing
Peace and Love
David
Commented on the poem "My Love" on 10/17/08 at 10:58 AM
this is a very nice poem.. I can appreciate you expression of love... and these lines are simply wonderful>>>"I'm a star with no light
A day with no night" I love that...
Please continue to keep ink in your pen and your pen to the pad... keep your mind free and let it flow...
Peace and Love
David T. Wilson
Commented on the poem "Fucking F1" on 10/13/08 at 06:23 PM
ok u really need to stop.... lol Hell wish it could get this hot... Damn... "I
can
orally make love to your
soul with just a hot cup of tea
I'll take a strong swig
while it's heating my mouth
I'll slide your whole shaft in
all the way down to the balls
warm
isn't it? " now u tell me how in the hell am i suposeto get something done after reading that...
Great drop...
Peace and Love
David
Commented on the poem "sheet of paper" on 10/11/08 at 09:12 PM
in context this line here is profound!!!>>>'a sheet of paper
simple in its own
do you own love
or is it just -- on loan "
well written piece... thought provoking...
Keep your pen flowing
Peace and Love
David