Nickname:Dawn Country:United States City:Houston State:TX Gender:Female Age:33 Member Since:Jul 05, 2008 Last Login:Dec 04, 2008 Poems Submitted:38 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:368 Poem Views:2,426 Member Comments:180
Awwwwhh..How sweet. whoever she is, should give you a big big hug and something special for later..you put it down.. I love poems that speak from the heart...real nice bro..
Commented on the poem "Goodbye" on 11/13/08 at 08:54 PM
Love It..Love It..Love It...you put it down for your grandma and I'm sure she would have appreciated this poem...nice flow and the words are beautiful--because you are speaking from the heart..one love
Commented on the poem "Broken" on 11/13/08 at 08:52 PM
Okay..I love the flow..the poem was really mellow and I felt your emotion...good job and I'm sure the lucky girl you miss..would really appreciate this...one love
Commented on the poem "Slow" on 11/13/08 at 08:51 PM
I'm keeping it real..you asked me to read your poem so this is my honest opinion..I loved the thought you put into it...but it sounded kind of mickeymouse to me...It sounded like a pick up line from when I was at a night club..I think you need more word usuage..and to add a little more spice..other than that...I love the concept..don't be mad..cuz I still love you regardless..one love bro.
Commented on the poem "Damn Nigga bathe" on 11/12/08 at 10:32 AM
I am laughing so hard..This was off the chain..."Damn Nigga Bathe". Been there......LOL..I'm cracking up...
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Commented on the poem "Eternal Instincts" on 11/13/08 at 09:03 PM
