Commented on the poem "U Aint" on 11/17/09 at 05:49 AM
lmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaao, my mind my mind, my mind... and even the dot dot dot has to be included lmao, man, maybe i could use some of this stuff, circles huh?
Commented on the poem "Only" on 11/14/09 at 01:39 AM
most def a poem high on my chart, i must say, i am damn shit impressed with this one, it talks directly to hearts and skips all the shit in the way... truely beautiful, had to read it twice, and the second time brought more emotion than the first, you outdid yourself - LCpl DEATH
lmaaaaaaaaaao. i love that last line, they need to put dat shit in a movie wit john tranolta and hallie barry and fucking monique, and just see where that shit goes, lol, but yes, i remember this one well
Commented on the poem "Bedtime Story" on 10/22/09 at 08:31 AM
lol, man, this one is, lol, pure mind-blowing, ut mos def in a good way, got me ready to write a little something of my own, somethingto get people\'s... emotions excited, and from all thefreaks around the globe ma, THANK YOU, lol, LCpl DEATH
Man, the words in this one force you to read t about three times, and still, i think it has many ifferent views, so many different point to grasp, and at the same time, you grab one the first time around, only to realize you let go of two, crazy yall just crazy, and if we had a rating system, ten, or four for the old school poets that still remain, ya dig, LCpl DEATH
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-MY LITTLE BROTHER, Re'Sean, IS MY LIFE!
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