omg this is the best poem i have read on here today. Everything you have aid was so true no matter how someone lives or looks they are still human and we as humans have an obligation to show love to everyone because like you said we just might give someone a reason to live. good write love it!
Commented on the poem "Love Licks" on 11/17/09 at 03:07 PM
good write a littele interesting. i think you walk out on a limb with word play though. when i first haerd fist and lips i thought that te male had hit the female. However its still a good poem.
Commented on the poem "Love & Ecstacy" on 11/17/09 at 03:03 PM
this is good i have a problem my love like 80 miles away and i ask myself how do i love some one miles away everyday. And how i would love a day of extasy with the better half of me. good write.