you have a beautiful mind...your message is amazing...i wish every single pperson could read this poem...it is powerful and would make people really think...you had a nice flow...i was hooked...this is an amazin write and itz now one of my favz...thanks for sharin...
Commented on the poem "nature's present" on 09/09/07 at 07:36 PM
this was so amazing...i love the rythm...the flow...the message...the rawness...the bitter reality...i love the voice and the feel and it let me speechless...i had to sit here for a couple and take deep breathes...ur amazin...ten starz