when i read the title it sounded as though you were angry at somone else. then the first line let me know otherwise. this is a poem that comes from true emotions of a broken heart. this poem comes from a person who understands their faults and really wants to make amends to the one they love. who sees the pain they've caused and is deeply saddened that things may never again be right. in the best case scenario she will forgive you but if she doesnt i can tell that you have said your peace and know that it is a possibilty. well written. you have a gift. keep writting!
i have walked these very same shoes.. it spoke to me in a way that is slightly frightening, but i really appreciated the honesty. life is about progressining and there will always be people who won't progress with you, but as long as you stay true to you, pardon my french but, "Fuck 'em"
i can tell u really put dat cranium to work!!! this poem is really good. i enjoyed reading it
Commented on the poem "Everydaysame" on 03/09/08 at 09:23 PM
all that shit is the same!...lol....no this was reall cool. i enjoyed reading it. as a matter of a fact i read it twice. keep doin what ya doin. this was a great one
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