This is an excellent poem here. Shows me how much you really love poetry and the visions it create on paper not spoken verbally but powerfully on paper.
I love your style and the way you spoke your mind about love...it was a very picturesque description and that wat i liked about it. you did a wonderful job
Commented on the poem "Common Courtesy" on 08/12/08 at 01:16 AM
Yes yes do it lol..naw beau...imma tell you like ill tell you on the phone...how bout ill tell you again on hte phone!..im calln now
this is a nice write seems like this person or thing has a real hold of all your emotions...dnt let it get the best of you my friend just let it go natural and whatever happens never give all your heart hun...love u femi
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Commented on the poem "The Presence Of You" on 08/12/08 at 09:03 PM
