Commented on the poem "SUGAR PUSSY" on 10/23/09 at 01:34 PM
damn....i\'m outta breath and a lil horny just reading this!!!! lol
wow you really had me going off every word and line and i loved how you said you couldnt describe the experience but you had a million examples of how wonderful it and she was...ima have to get me one of those!!! lol lovely write poet
damn...i know that feeling all too well. and the quite sicrets in the notebook. loved the concept and the flow and the line about the photos. sense in verse!!! poet
Commented on the poem "OK........" on 10/23/09 at 01:16 PM
boo you can\'t be tellin everybody wgat we did last nite!!! lmao as always you took me on a trip...with this write!!!!! lol
Commented on the poem "Jazzy Blue Notes" on 10/12/09 at 10:28 AM
wow u had me going the whole time
i can just see you there waiting on him you looking happy then ur face changing with the tone. very expressive!! ur a lovely story teller. and real and that.....
Commented on the poem "STAND UP!" on 09/14/09 at 06:53 PM
yes yes. pump ya fist and pull out the bullhorns. this is a hot response sweet simple and ever so meaningful.
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