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Commented on the poem "Dreaming" on 11/20/09 at 02:58 PM

Damn. with words like this, I wish that the one...Beautiful words from a beautiful young woman...Be Blessed, and Faithful/Peace

Commented on the poem "Left in the Past" on 11/20/09 at 02:56 PM

Hey there Sister. God Bless you, and yours....I have no regrets in telling that this was nicely written. Be Blessed, and Faithful/Peace

Commented on the poem "A is woman like a Rose" on 11/20/09 at 02:53 PM

Hey there Sister. God Bless you, and yours. I love this poem. Love the composition. Love the language. Love the flow. Maybe just a little tweaking in spots. I want your poetry to be all that it can be. You will definitely be a force to feared in this poetry thing. Write, write, write, and then write some more...And, then edit until your work is flawless, or damn near so. Be Well, and Be Faithful/Peace. You have my admiration as a fellow Artist...One

Commented on the poem "illuminati" on 11/19/09 at 07:17 PM

Hey there. God Bless you, and yours...This poem is very spiritual, and insightful. Love the composition. Love the overall cadence.Those who know me on GS Poetry know that I never nitpick at another artist's offering. However, it is my obligation as a Brother, and as a Friend to help my fellow artists to improve their skills as such. Your opening stanza "Spread through the vains", as opposed to "Spread through the veins". Your sixth stanza..."Watching our blood poor innocently", as opposed to "Watching our blood pour innocently" Believe it or not, I've probably pointed things out two, or three times to artists on the various sites that I contribute poetry to. As artists, when we compose from the soul, and post it for others to see. We should always put our best foot forward intellectually, grammatically, and creatively. Never knowing what agent, publisher, or other person, who could further your career could be reading your work. I love you, and your message. So, please don't get it twisted. I'm a Christian Brother, who the Good Lord has given a lot of gifts to. Therefore the meaning of this piece is dead on. Nonetheless, to the careful reader, sometimes even a miniscule mistake can, and will be seen. As as you would know, encountering a mistake in any literature takes away from the continuity of the what's being read...Your art is beautiful, and can only get better. i'm always here as a Brother, And as a Friend. May I invite you to read..."New York City Vicious Cycle" , and part of my life story in..."This Is The Life These Eyes Have Seen"? It was a privilege to read a poem with Our Savior in mind. Be Well, and Be Faithful/Peace

Commented on the poem "Collabo - Hey Girl Remix W/Audio" on 11/18/09 at 05:13 PM

Hey there Brother. God Bless you, and yours. You were 100% correct. This piece is smoking hot!!! This would be even better if you recorded this in a studio. One of the best collabos I've had the privilege of ingesting...And, damn, for a Soulcast, you couldn't have come any better. Two quick things. Please vote for the Poet Don Poetiq on this season of America's Got Talent. And, can you check out..."Sometimes", and..."This Is The Life These Eyes Have Seen"? Be Well, and Be Faithful/Peace