Uh-oh I think we might have a "real" poet on our hands here. This is the first piece I've read by you and it's well done. It's interesting how you mixed sexual references i.e trojan/lifestyle and what I took as, a love for the mary jane and applied it to the love of a writer. Nice Job. *D*
Commented on the poem "They Fall" on 06/17/09 at 02:07 PM
This struck me...I got a war image. I see falling soldiers..."Oh how they decend upon the land...This piece lights the readers imagination...very nice.
Commented on the poem "♥ & ♠ & ♣ OH MY" on 01/16/09 at 10:23 AM
This is FANTASTIC! hahahaha funny and creative, well written, a twist on a subject matter we've ALL written about (lost love) but done in a very fresh way. Nice Job poet. One thing though, you wrote "I used to love to go to ♣'s.
With the ones I l♥ved.
But it stopped." Did you mean "it" stopped or "I" stopped in that last line? You can always edit the piece and fix it if it was in fact a mistake. Def a fav. *D*
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Commented on the poem "Flyleaf" on 09/07/09 at 10:30 AM
