wow;; this was amazinq... and for me to have not been there ; i feel like i just qained major insiqht into why ppl talk so neqatively about my qenerations idea of music... it kills me how you're so correct . this was a very vivid piece non.the.less . i loved it--qreat write.
Commented on the poem "Thoughts" on 02/16/09 at 07:04 AM
you should already know how i feel about this one . lol i don't even know what to say--i'm speechless . but i know one thinq... i'm writinq a response . period. :]
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Commented on the poem "The Break Down" on 02/16/09 at 06:52 AM
"emotionally, i tap the sidewalks of pure ecstasy"--whoaa ! that line blew me away... the entire thinq is a masterpiece, but that riqht there made me stop in my track and read it aqain . i aqree w/ one of your other comments, this is uniQue ; which makes it an even better piece. you've qot your own style and it's so simple, yet so complex and bold... and powerful... and rivetinq . this was deep tay .
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Commented on the poem "I Stand" on 02/16/09 at 06:49 AM
i mos.def read this one twice to make sure i fully understood the concept . you're soo damn talented... w/ such a clever way w/ words. the way this flows is perfect for what you're tryna say here. i like your use of repetition to emphasize those certain parts . as always--you amaze me.
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damn;; i didn't know.........i mean, i know what you're capable of, but damn . this was amazinq . && i've qot to qet around to the rest of em, but bby ; we need to collab, Quick . :] we'll talk about it. this was deep and movinq and your word.play is crazy... **applause**
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Commented on the poem "Back in The Day ((also on my page))" on 03/02/09 at 04:23 PM
