Nickname:Elijah the Great Country:United States City:Jackson State:MS Gender:Male Age:23 Member Since:Mar 26, 2007 Last Login:May 14, 2009 Poems Submitted:6 Poem Comments:45 Poem Views:781 Member Comments:45
Very nice. The image, the song, and your words make the reader feel her pain and feelings of being forgotten and overlooked, as we all feel sometimes. It dwells on the timeless question of "Why, God?" "What have I done to deserve this?" Its almost as if I can hear it, see it. And nice structure too
Very nice. Onward Christian soldier. Complaining means you dont trust God. Doing something about the situation is a better thing, but Faith is everything. Very good write
Commented on the poem "Thick Women" on 08/19/07 at 11:08 PM
Thats right. Tell em. Aint nothin wrong with thick, its beautiful. Dont dare explain yourself to anyone. You are doing exactly what you should be. Luvin it
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Commented on the poem "If His Eye's On The Sparrow... (a junkie's plea)" on 09/16/07 at 04:17 PM
