Commented on the poem "Breathe" on 12/06/07 at 05:17 PM
Oh Man! I love this peice it was very passionate and imtimate i loved the visual it gave me.....plus im a very kinky person so i actually felt this lol! great write!
I see that you put a lot of emotion into this, when we put our tears on paper we open our selves up to the world, and you did a wonderful job. you are very talented, keep it up. 1
Commented on the poem "ADULTHOOD" on 11/20/07 at 11:05 AM
Damn i am really lovin this one your poem was slick twisted but i loved it. 1
Commented on the poem "MURDER JUSTICE" on 11/20/07 at 10:56 AM
I was drawn into this story and didnt see the meaning until the end. Great write i am interested to read more of your pieces. 1
Commented on the poem "The Last Divide" on 11/20/07 at 10:52 AM
I see you put thought into the real meaning in your pieces and try to show the reader what that deep thought is exactly, i like this write keep it up and keep em coming
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April 06, 2007 at 01:31 AM
Im gonna finish freak me baby its just im not in that place right now. Im sure those who understand know what im talkin about. Read my latest and see if you can understand.
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Commented on the poem "Breathe" on 12/06/07 at 05:17 PM
