Nickname:floatingontheverb Country:United States City:I move a lot State:GA Gender:Female Age:28 Member Since:Oct 26, 2009 Last Login:Nov 20, 2009 Poems Submitted:21 Poem Comments:74 Poem Views:746 Member Comments:29
Commented on the poem "Erotics" on 11/19/09 at 11:43 PM
damn man, I dig your writing, I gotta fav this write because I just truly enjoyed reading this... I love your rhythm.. it's so raw... If there was a category for the hottest... I'd stick it there instead of erotic... very hot write.
Commented on the poem "FUCK ME WRITE" on 11/19/09 at 10:13 PM
ooh this is a very nice write here, very creative, and I love how creative you are in it... "WITH VIOLENT SYMPHONIES
PLAY YOUR BEST PIECE
WHEN YOUR FUCKING ME;" ha, some lines kind of cracked me up but your love for poetry is so well said in this.. nice write.
Commented on the poem "Dear COSMO" on 11/19/09 at 10:10 PM
I love how you talked about your eyes and stretch marks.. cuz real women have em, i know i do.. and i get so sick and tired of people assuming women should be so small, and so fantasy.. i love this write, because you started off about a magazine, ended with it, but within the written text about it, the meaning was so much more and so much deeper than a magazine.. you really empowered this piece.. i am glad i read this tonight.
Commented on the poem "Starving artist" on 11/19/09 at 10:07 PM
"Ribs shaped like pencils
Body outlined in stencils
Of white chalk on ghettoed pavements"... that blew me away. .. and the end, "Can you get full off “Food for thoughts?”
If so, feed me my wisdom"... damn that was fresh, can you get full off food for thoughts.. this poem was written so well... nice write.
Commented on the poem "the summary" on 11/19/09 at 10:04 PM
I like this poem a lot, and I loved the ending.. kind of surprised me, "hand him the screws".. I hear that, so easy to just hand over the permission to take advantage and be everything you never wanted them to be... "added color to the brother standin in your shoes
but thankfully a love awoke in me
who knew" I love this part and the end.
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Commented on the poem "Erotics" on 11/19/09 at 11:43 PM
