short spoken but filled with emotions this is what's up i can dig it some people need to express such feelings to the people they care about instead of keeping them in and the people who care from them will only admire them more deeply unless excuse my American French the bitch is a hoe then or the nigga is too then they won't appreciate it as much ya' know 10*s good write
Wow well look baby girl you can serve as your own supply of love ya know there's no better love you can feel than when loved by God and His Son and the love you provide for yourself ya know cause that's how you know it's true and won't leave you for someone who looks better or has less flaws or someone who respects herself less than you do enough to throw herself at another woman's man nah mean hate we can get from anyone and give not care because it's hate it doesn't hurt it only hurts those that love you but love love is something you should take caution in giving because it can hurt you deeper than any damage our human bodies can take nah mean take that from a brotha who may not have experience because of age but for a youngin i've been through a lot a hell of a lot and appreciating women is one thing my mother taught best and it stuck so i feel your pain because i've fealt the same but be your strength and love and no one will have the power to crush you except God but he wouldn't unless your prideful anyways, don't let another keep you down if it's not your fault if they blame you and you know the truth then be your own crutch ya know with much love -Flowet- .One
Ohhhh mah God...i have nothing to say but re-read the comment Ms. Geel left you and that's as best as any comment can be put
Commented on the poem "The veil" on 11/12/09 at 04:50 PM
wow i like this few can drop a short poem and reach out as far as this goes I'm not downsizing any poets but simply stating that, for a short poem this is touching and you can't help but feel it 10*s mos. assu -Flowet- .One
wow reminds me my street maplewood sounds harmless but it's far from it ya know i'm not about to go in depth on a comment of what i've been through but i use those things, those problems, obstacles, those trials as a muse to keep writing to stay in school to keep motivating people so they don't have to end up how i did now i see where the emotion comes from you know people who've been through hell can best describe an almost accurate picture of heaven, funny though, no one cares when you have family members that can help you due to the fact that they have large amounts of money no one does they see you watch you tease you mock you they do everything but one thing help you but you know what that's exactly what makes me love my family and me and want success because i've lived knowing there will be no one else who does once again in the more needed to be heard than before immortal words of Tupac Shakur "you just gotta keep ya head" they say change gone come then Barack came I hope that's not all they meant, people need more change than that ya know
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