Commented on the poem "Back Again" on 08/12/09 at 12:00 PM
lol!!! omgsh!!! I love ittt! i could never forget how you were my insperation to start writing. you have major skill!! (even though you dont think so all the time, yet we are our own worst cridicts) had me laughing toward the end with your " hiatus.....What rhymes with hiatus?" lol you rock booker! glad you got back "in the game" hope to be reading more from you soon!
haha sweeeeet! Yall did ur this one! You both worked very well together! you both portrayed some major word play! Yall should collaborate more often :D Yall keep doin ur thanggggg Ten stars!
Commented on the poem "Babafemi" on 07/31/09 at 01:13 AM
WOWWWW Sean!!! Oh My GOSH! you brought like tears to my eyes with this one! more people should love and cherish their fathers this way. so often we take for granted the most important things and people in our lives.. And sometimes it takes something like this to put things into prospective... I love your analogy with the "Seed, tree, grow, bad roots" stuff haha i just love it! ten stars all the way, and a personal fave! keep the ink flowin!
Commented on the poem "PERFECT" on 07/31/09 at 01:08 AM
wow, i really love this write! it can be looked upon in so many different ways, which also means that many can relate to this one. For me, it sounds like it could have been aimed toward someone in love. or maybe even ones relationship with the lord! I loved it! ten stars and a personal fave! keep the ink flowin!
Commented on the poem "Its Wats Real" on 07/31/09 at 01:05 AM
haha nice write!
this seemed more like a dedication or something to me than anything else!
enjoyed reading it
keep the ink flowin!
December 07, 2008 at 02:00 PM
Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength.
They Do it so we dont have to!!
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Some people spend an entire lifetime wondering if they made a difference. The Marines don't have that problem...They are Warriors by Day, Lovers by Night, Professionals by Choice, and Marines by the Grace of God!
11-4-08
He darn sure is not perfect. But God put him in authority for a reason.
PRAY FOR OUR PRESIDENT
Romans 13:1
Let every person be subject to the governing authorities. For there is no authority except from God, and those that exist have been instituted by God.
WOW yo Frenchy omg yo I an't talked to you in forever how you been? how is life? I been offa this site for a very long time lol but yea I hope all is well wit ya ma write me when you get a chance
I'm ready when you are. I'm waiting for the invite and the topic.. but then again I've been writing on pretty much everything lately. I got the juices flowing
texsrat? What the feezy? Am I the only person who can text an off the dome tightness poem? yeah probably. I'ma get back into the swing of things. The one I wrote today was a taste of goodness. Rhymed enough but the flow was illin it. One thing is that I'm still scatterbrained, jumping topics. Gimme a topice and let me get in it's ass like a prison inmate!
Quit LYING!!!! That poem was a 6 star. At best 8 star. I did read some of my old stuff. How come no one told me that lyrically ill. My rhymes made me shiver.