Commented on the poem "virtuous woman" on 08/25/07 at 11:49 PM
...absolutely beautiful
Commented on the poem "Do I Qualify?" on 08/25/07 at 11:46 PM
this is quite brillant.
i'm not sure if it was intended to be read this way, but i really like that you used "lie" in the 13th or so line...it kinda asks a double question:
- do i posses these qualities
and
- are these traits liying as they intermingle inside of me...
...nice effect
keep writing...ur good!!