This was wonderfully built. The entire poem building up to that last stanza and quietly alluding to it all the while. I don't really think I can find the right words for this one, at least not something that hasn't already been stated by my peers. Truly a beautiful & evocative write
Commented on the poem "Bride n’ Tide" on 06/21/09 at 03:15 PM
I think I remember this one, or perhaps it was another like it...regardless, as always I enjoy reading your writes and the lyrical time machine of sorts that I step into upon doing so. Beautiful language, haunting content, all the makings of a masterwork.
lol, at syndel. I know it's been a while since I've been by, but I agree completely w/ this. I've always thought there was truth to that saying, but that people would pervert & twist it to meet their own particular needs, or attempt to justify some choice that they may have made. But you said it best w/ that last line, "Be YOUR positive self is my main suggestion". *mike drops* nothing more need be said :)
Commented on the poem "Worthless" on 06/15/09 at 11:56 PM
*smile* I remember hearing in church one time that our own mind is often the largest roadblock that we have to overcome. So often we can defeat ourselves through self-doubt...glad to see that you rise above it.
Commented on the poem "Not for SALE" on 06/15/09 at 11:51 PM
It's most unfortunate how many potential queens choose to take that route. It's even more so when lifelong friendships are broken over it. I agree w/ the others before me, u truly speak wisdom.
New writes coming soon
June 15, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Hey GS,
I know I've been out the game for a while, actually longer than I care to recall, but I'm picking the pen back up again. Perhaps try something new...Regardless, I'll be back soon, & for those that dropped a message or stopped by during my hiatus, you have no idea how much I appreciate it.
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