See this is what's wrong with America. People loving people that love other people. C'mon people! lol. Nah but seriously, this right here sounds like drama just waiting to happen. How can he kiss someone else and then go right to you unless you have an open relationship? That would've made me jealous, too, in the past. Now if I see whomever I'm with kissing someone else and we arent open like that, I wish them well and K.I.M. Interesting write though. Thank you.
Stunning, my friend. Brilliantly stunning. You paint reality with words just as well Michaelangelo do with oil and brush. And it makes me think and examine my own intentions and actions in life.
Commented on the poem "No Time..." on 11/18/09 at 06:26 PM
Man, this really make me think. I'm always concern'd about having enough time. I've lived my life thinking the world was going in end or reach some type of apocalypse in my lifetime. So this piece reminds of that and makes me think.
Commented on the poem "I'm a SQUIRTER" on 11/17/09 at 08:01 PM
Yet another good thing about Chicago. I love my city and women of.
i feel the message and your emotion but like you said the bible says it's going to get worst before it gets better. all this violence is temperary. but it will end even though people may not hear what you are trying to say to them or listen to the message. but i am right there with you. i want it to end too.
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Commented on the poem "The Longed for Kiss" on 11/20/09 at 05:04 PM
