ma i could feel your pain...tears ran from my eyes as i read this piece. It was like placing a mirror up to my own life. You read the very depths of my soul with this one...great write ma!
wow wow wow and wow again....i'm left speechless. this is so real and i know exactly what you are going through. keep up the good work ma and have faith....believe it or not people do change. I just went through the same situation and once i was brave enough to actually let my guards down it turned out to be the best decision i ever made...now we're happy and i feel complete. Good look on your journey!!!
This explains exactly how I am feeling right now. I truly needed this. I cried as i read the words...my favorite line "no man has ever successfully killed my spirit, broken my heart, and left my insides to rot from loneliness!!!!!!! DAMN speaks volumes ma! Good write.
Wow ma. This poem was great. I just sat here speechless for a moment. The music and the background simply add to the brillance of this piece. keep ya pen moving and keep up the good work. Great write ma!
Commented on the poem "Broken Happiness" on 12/02/08 at 10:39 PM
**sighs** how many nights have i sat and cried tears from feeling alone, hurt, sad....a beatiful girl with so much ahead of her but all the time longing for something that nothing or no one can seem to provide. This poem explains my emotions exactly and I love it. Great write please keep up the good work.
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