pretty kewl piece..i feel ur message.i guess dat's why i'm not inspired to write anymore,since bullshyt has filtered dis site & real talent, & creativity is no longer appreciated
Commented on the poem "Unnoticed" on 06/13/09 at 05:53 PM
dis piece is so sincere & sweet.....i love da way ur mind works..ur words are so well put together...it always make me smile.........perfect title for dis rite..ur wordplay perfect.. had me imagine if i wore those shoes ..could i put my words so perfectly as you to describe those feelings
o.m.g..i so love dis piece..it made me smile......all u needed wuz the pharcyde's "she' keeps on passing me by"to go with dis rite......feels like ur speaking of da kid..lol...i'm so conceited..lmao