Commented on the poem "A man is" on 11/06/09 at 01:14 PM
even though this poem is short it has a lot of meaning to it....it's 1 of those simply complicated kind of things but anyway good writin keep on typin
Commented on the poem "Left in the Past" on 11/06/09 at 11:58 AM
i've been trying to leave stuff n the past my self but mending a broken heart is hard especially when you hav 2 see nd hear frm the person knowing you can't hav them but neways great mami i def feelin it keep typin this is a good writin :)
i love how this poem begans it reminds me of spoken word @ an underground cafe or something and keep holding that pen i can testify to the fact it won't let u down as long as you write with it keep up the good work :)
Commented on the poem "Focal Point: You" on 11/05/09 at 02:40 AM
i can honestly feel the emotion poured into this poem and i can relate to how u feel about your love i've felt this way before it's rare and precious so don;t forget about it
damn i'm madd u left me hanging where is part 6 dammit but it's cool lol this still a beautiful poem just hope you finish the rest....keep up the good work
This song is soooo beautiful it makes me cry everytime i hear it
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Commented on the poem "A man is" on 11/06/09 at 01:14 PM
