Commented on the poem "When Im Gone" on 08/12/09 at 04:00 AM
homie this is a really nice peom...welcome to the site first off...now i l ike the way you played both sides of the fence...cant to many paeople pro and con theyelf. it was a well writtn piece.
yo kid this is untouchable. i've never felt suicidal but my ex has and i've seen some of the emotional torment that you go through. it's a hard fought road and for you to be able to over come that and be able to kill that section without killing you is amazing. some people can't over come that feat. warrior status homie.
Commented on the poem "8 second warning" on 08/13/08 at 11:24 AM
well well well. we givin people time limits now huh? this is a good write kid. sometimes you jus gotta let people know how much time they have leave before funereal arrangements will be needed. 10 stars man. 10 stars
Commented on the poem "WE the People" on 01/09/08 at 10:46 AM
real talk...i think you took a real direct approach to tihs poem. its a good write. man you got to do anotherversion of this and keep this goin. you hit on somethin hard and truth be told youhit alot of things that people would not touch. kid great write. keep it up
Commented on the poem "Eat Me Out" on 01/09/08 at 10:36 AM
this has a good concept and is a well written poem. i feel like you held back a lil. i think you should take this so in depth that it makes the reader want to have you in his arms. and by reading some of your other poems i no u kan do it. but all in all this is a good write. remember in peotry nothin is on the line but your heart.
time for a change
April 07, 2007 at 11:39 PM
yo listen its time for a change. i truly believe that its bullshit that gs has to open up another section for people to realize true talent. man up and give these people wut they really deserve. thats the only way they gone get beeta. damn!!!!! niggaz is lazy and scared to tell the truth
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Commented on the poem "When Im Gone" on 08/12/09 at 04:00 AM
