i like the core of your poems! and the thoughts of u slip in each time your thought changed!
Commented on the poem "New Shit..." on 11/19/09 at 02:30 PM
i felt like i was reading a song it has that type of flow and the way it seemed like thoughts rather than a poem i was whisked away in your love with this i enjoyed
i like the matter-of-factly tone used through out this poem... like almost cocky but pleasant. like the 3 different parts told a different story never losing the theme...so chill u are !
Commented on the poem "Slow dance naked" on 11/18/09 at 11:38 PM
thought i shouldnt be reading this... i like the flow and the imagery (minus naked) but dancing like a sway and your in a public place but u feel your alone with the person ... feeling them so high u wanna get naked