Commented on the poem "My Secrets!!" on 10/08/07 at 07:27 PM
hey...I see your poem.. its filled with you inner most secrets but it also is saying there is more to that....id like ot know more and be your friend.....life may seem busy with no one to turn to for help or support but im right here. look at some of my poems and se where I come from.. fell free to hit me up id like to be your friend.. you will be most deff. in my prayers and you will see the days turn clearer...the sunrise is just above the horizon...If you fell that no one knows what your going through please consider the one that made you is looking down. he sees every tear that drops.....-Adrian M.
Commented on the poem "Parts of me" on 04/28/07 at 09:11 PM
thats whats up, you got your mind on something I suggest you follow tha. follow your heart your passion, writing and poetry is obvioussly yours bro. keep it up mang. -100
Commented on the poem "There's Hope" on 04/28/07 at 09:08 PM
yo, thats wuts up, thats wuts tight. see I never thought that there could be hope with so many games people play and yo by hearing this it sounds great. thats hot. keep up that ill skillz,-100
Commented on the poem "B's" on 04/22/07 at 05:55 PM
I like how you set it up wiht that soft music on the background as people read this poem. Look in life we are not always going to have the cake and Ice cream...there are going to be hard times and times that we just seem not to understand but do understand that things happen for a reason even if we dont know that reason. in life accept what you cant change and change what you can. food for thouhgt. nice spit mami. -100
Commented on the poem "Fuck U" on 04/14/07 at 09:45 PM
dang...yo, im keep it real simple..ther is a bible text that say "he that is slow to anger is geater than the mighty". we just need to learn, accept and move on..thats how we do. nice spit, -Adrian
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