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There's not much I can tell. Gather what you will about me through my poetry. Decide for yourself. Check me out. www.myspace.com/trixxs_profile

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Commented on the poem "A PUBLISHER'S PEN........." on Feb 26, 2009 at 10:32 PM

I love the content of your poem. It's motivation, and the ease of words within a poet's spirit. It's about the pen, the most reliable source of a poet's work. The most common tool. With that said, the only critique I would give would be grammar. I see this a lot in the poetry that circulates about this site. The words themselves are dope, but the structure lacks a little something here and there. So, for content...I give you a 10. For structure, I give you a 4. 7 stars total, love.

Commented on the poem "Falacy" on Feb 26, 2009 at 8:26 PM

I love this poem, and the message is pristine. The only criticism I would give, would be to utilize more grammar points into your poetry. Reading this was kind of halting. No periods, no points of rest, not knowing where exactly you should step down the ladder, and how. It's was just a free-fall. So, on content, I give you a 10. In grammar, I'd have to give you a 5.

Commented on the poem "" on Feb 9, 2009 at 4:58 PM

Oh lawd, I'd much rather hear this lol, there's so much that can only be emphasized by the cadence and tone of voice...But I love it ^_^+

Commented on the poem "Kiss From A Rose" on Feb 9, 2009 at 5:09 AM

I love the concept/content of the poem...it seems like an ode/parody to the song. Keep writing ^_^+

Commented on the poem "Lost Time" on Feb 2, 2009 at 8:16 PM

Tiny beads of secrets? As if each droplet of water held a hundred things left unsaid. I love this...I'm coming back with a response.

Performance.

February 02, 2009 at 03:47 PM

Knicks Poetry Slam 2009 Semi-Finals.

I didn't advance, but it was 1) the first time I performed in front of a live audience with judges...and when I actually got on stage, I wasn't that fazed...2) I had the greatest time. And if you look on youtube (anything with Knicks Poetry slam 2009 in it) and see all the OTHER dope poets? You'll know why.

So. I want critique on the performance. It means a lot to me...

Thanks in advance ^_^+

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Knicks Poetry Slam 2009 Semi-Finals. I didn't advance, but it was 1) the first time I performed in front of a live audience with judges...and when I actually got on stage, I wasn't that fazed...2) I had the greatest time. And if you look on youtube (anything with Knicks Poetry slam 2009 in it) and see all the OTHER dope poets? You'll know why. So. I want critique on the performance. It means a lot to me... Thanks in advance ^_^+ <object alt="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/XEvur8ukguY&hl=en&fs=1"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/XEvur8ukguY&hl=en&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" alt="425" height="344"></embed></object>

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Jul 30, 2009 at 1:08 am

Got your link of of Allpoetry.com

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Feb 25, 2009 at 3:48 pm

whats good babygirl, i haven't heard from u in a while....

Sincere T

Feb 3, 2009 at 1:55 pm

Interesting, very interesting. I would very much love to know more about this history and your history. I wonder if you have discussed these issues in some of your poetry. I really believe you should.

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Feb 3, 2009 at 11:46 am

lol, its coo mama, but we can do somethin on the line of rejection & pain, what you think of that?

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Jan 30, 2009 at 10:06 pm

lmao, smoke me wit the pen? naw mama, but instead of bumpin,w hy don't we just collab and see who shines harder?????