Nickname:Insatiable.vessel Country:United States City:Milwaukee State:WI Gender:Female Age:21 Member Since:Jul 17, 2007 Last Login:Nov 20, 2008 Poems Submitted:83 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:587 Poem Views:6,179 Member Comments:165
Commented on the poem "My Smile Lies" on 10/21/08 at 11:51 PM
i realized that i left without commenting.. and its not gonna be long, cuz u already know where i stand wit this issue. but i will say that i agree wit B.Rose that it is that sad and crazy reality. and as usual u penned it so naturally, as if you were talkin to urself in the mirror, recappin the days events. so it is written...
awwwwwwwwwwww!!! Good looks wit the acknowledgment!! um, yea i kno EXACTLY how this feels... i have a friend, soon to be more than a friend *crosses fingers* that when he speaks, my skin melts and i just let my body go cuz just hearin him gives me those good vibrations!! SHEESH! but this was a great write.. i love ya flow.. and u prolly wrote this in 5 mins. i can tell in her writes that u just flow, and talk...and it goes so natural, but its so great. lol and nice nostalgic reference wit the tomagochi and gigapet!!
Commented on the poem "Never Had You" on 09/21/08 at 08:14 PM
I can relate, for the longest my father was not around... this write was so intense... I felt the piece build up, word after word, the intensity grew... it gripped me from the first word to the last... the way u painted the picture was great. excellent piece... so heart felt.
who hasn't felt like this!? maaaaaan! simplistic and straight to the point, yet so powerful.. DAMN! this tugged at all angles of my soul! and the pic is the epitome of my current relationship. Brilliant.
Look at you!! this was sheer beauty painted so precisely with your words... I loved this write...the way that you flow is so natural, and the imagery was on point... Excellently done
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Commented on the poem "My Smile Lies" on 10/21/08 at 11:51 PM
