Commented on the poem "How Old Are You?" on 03/18/09 at 09:30 PM
Bowchicka wow wow!! Get 'em daddy!, got all these young ladies ready to throw they drawls at you!!! lol I haven't been around in a while, and this is the 1st thing i see when i come back.. hahaha Nicely done.
Commented on the poem "My Smile Lies" on 10/21/08 at 11:51 PM
i realized that i left without commenting.. and its not gonna be long, cuz u already know where i stand wit this issue. but i will say that i agree wit B.Rose that it is that sad and crazy reality. and as usual u penned it so naturally, as if you were talkin to urself in the mirror, recappin the days events. so it is written...
awwwwwwwwwwww!!! Good looks wit the acknowledgment!! um, yea i kno EXACTLY how this feels... i have a friend, soon to be more than a friend *crosses fingers* that when he speaks, my skin melts and i just let my body go cuz just hearin him gives me those good vibrations!! SHEESH! but this was a great write.. i love ya flow.. and u prolly wrote this in 5 mins. i can tell in her writes that u just flow, and talk...and it goes so natural, but its so great. lol and nice nostalgic reference wit the tomagochi and gigapet!!
Commented on the poem "Never Had You" on 09/21/08 at 08:14 PM
I can relate, for the longest my father was not around... this write was so intense... I felt the piece build up, word after word, the intensity grew... it gripped me from the first word to the last... the way u painted the picture was great. excellent piece... so heart felt.
who hasn't felt like this!? maaaaaan! simplistic and straight to the point, yet so powerful.. DAMN! this tugged at all angles of my soul! and the pic is the epitome of my current relationship. Brilliant.
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Commented on the poem "How Old Are You?" on 03/18/09 at 09:30 PM
