you def made me curious to what you sent in that last text! lol this is written like a melodic story! great!
Commented on the poem "Bulimic Thoughts" on 11/04/09 at 02:46 AM
I like the idea in this but some of the lines i didn't follow! I had to read it several times. I am so happy that writing is such a deep expression of self for you! but don't hurt yaself lol
Commented on the poem "Fridy Nights" on 11/04/09 at 01:47 AM
I agree with The Clinician, we all have urges that are natural but nothing a cold shower wouldn't cure! Waiting for love is worth it. Especially when it's the real deal. Wonderfully depicted.
Commented on the poem "smitten" on 11/04/09 at 01:36 AM
yup when you're smitten there is nothing that will stop it! just go along with the flow! I loved this one.