i loove yur scribes 'cause it's like snooping in yur journal.. it's raw and just there no need to over read it yu mean exactly what yu mean.. amazing write as always hun
Commented on the poem "Pastor said" on 10/21/09 at 08:19 PM
this was good,; had a few spots where i had to reread to understand because of how it was written.. but it was still iight hun.. and the concept is good i think you could of went harder on it though
Commented on the poem "UNtiTled: S.P.D" on 10/21/09 at 08:16 PM
this was something like a deep personal write.. so to me it feels like i stepped into someones private journal but this was nice hun hopefully soon you\'ll understand whats going on and overcome that bump
Commented on the poem "ultimate high" on 10/21/09 at 08:13 PM
this is cute i deff love it.. i wrote and posted something like thiis a while backk so i can definitely understand where it comes from.. niice job hun