Nickname:Jamillah Country:United States City:Asbury Park State:NJ Gender:Female Age:28 Member Since:Aug 13, 2007 Last Login:Nov 19, 2009 Poems Submitted:144 Poem Comments:1,577 Poem Views:14,709 Member Comments:799
lol.. aw.. cute.. i would hope we can all say we've 'been here.. done that' ....
Commented on the poem "Magnetic Force" on 11/19/09 at 06:03 AM
bout, rather
Commented on the poem "Magnetic Force" on 11/19/09 at 06:03 AM
lol.. yerp. what is it bout men? botu the 'wrong' one who just seems so right... opposites attracting.. maybe there's something truly to that thing... nice.
Commented on the poem "World Untouched" on 11/19/09 at 06:01 AM
As a poem, i appreciate it for the style.. the freeness formed. Content-wise, it makes me pause.. makes me feel some empathy for them. While I'm all for not casting pearls before swine... some women aren't truly worth a brothas time... They have that 'u owe me' mentality.. ..have a brotha payin someone elses dues.. At the same time, some need to be reminded of a woman's/would-be wifey's worth... so yea.. they need to put in that work. Nice job..
Commented on the poem "Feels Like Rain" on 11/16/09 at 01:17 AM
I sure hate pain.. but I love what it induces.. produces.. makes a pen bleed.. especially yours.
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Commented on the poem "This SUCKS!!!! :(" on 11/19/09 at 06:06 AM
