I like how you expressed your emotions. I guess that's how love goes sometimes. You love, you hurt, then you live. Nice write. I agree with that sentiment wholeheartedly. Versatile hit it right on the head. I feel this poem because sometimes you have to let the other person know how much they matter to you and that no matter what you'll always be true. Good piece!
Hey fam, this was dope from start to finish. I love the rhyme scheme, and more than that I love the topic itself. Not too many poets on here touch on what's going on in the innercity. Good piece overall. Keep it up.
This was pretty good. I loved the depth of this write. It spoke volumes on how true love exists for so long. Keep up the work. I think you're a good writer.