Commented on the poem "SoHard/R.I.P" on 08/21/08 at 06:33 PM
damn this hit hard...i see how u feel though bc i go thru the same thing when i lose someone close man it hurts lyk hell an u ask GOD why like wats the point wat r u doin this ot me for...man i want an answer so bad about losin so many of my guys...an mii girls like the ones that arent even doin wrong dyin...mii lil cuzin died from a heart attack this past may...he just tured 18 lyk 19 days b4 he died was finna graduate an all..man im still hurtin from that like are u serious...mii lil cuzin mii lil hoppa mii lil everything that kid had mii heart an i miss him...
Commented on the poem "Respect My men" on 08/12/08 at 12:13 PM
wow ur second to last stanza is def. something u snapped on...dang...if u were to perform this i def. know ud get people standing an clapping cause thats the truth an men dont see it...ur def. talented girl...im diggin ya writes keep em' comin honestly
Commented on the poem "One night stand" on 08/12/08 at 12:08 PM
i like this its a lil deeper than most of the erotic poems people put up...it def. isnt like any of mii writes an honestly i like the approach u took ma...it hots...so 10
man u know i got you besty i love mii lil god daughter an u best frend...she is going to love you an help u even if u think she isnt...yea im still mad at he for doin that stuff but u know u gotta 4give an 4get because she'll regret it...she is tryin to throw it in ur face an it'll backfire bc when they say u aren a man they gotta realize ur takin up a responsibility that u didnt intend to do...ur raising a kid u knew nun about till after she was born an look how great ur handeling it???man she is the luckeist baby alive an has u as her father couldnt be luckier...cheer up an just do u...im here no matter wat babysittin counts when ur at practice...*Besos*
i took her by lil wayne...weezy da beast of da streetz
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Commented on the poem "SoHard/R.I.P" on 08/21/08 at 06:33 PM
