Commented on the poem "A man.." on 11/18/09 at 09:59 PM
"Journey to and through a man"
I loved this one line bcuz it takes so much to travel thru a man, it takes strength and courage to truly get thru a man! But overall this was kind of sad but well wirtten. It seems like every time we are ready for someone, they are never ready for us. Excellent write!
Your flow was on point! I love the motion of your words. This was a sad piece, but also beatifully written as well. Definitely an amazing write, keep flowin . U have talent
Love this poem, i definitely will be favoring it too. "Wearing discriminated's incorrect skin color" this whole poem was dynamic but this line stood out tha most to me. U really understand the injustice that we have to face for being "unright" for being white. You captured racism perfectly! And i love the whole analogy of getting arrested just for being black. Overall excellent write!