Commented on the poem "When Poetry Hits" on 06/06/09 at 04:21 PM
its cute and simple ten starta
Commented on the poem "Through my Eyes" on 11/28/08 at 03:25 AM
OMG muk muk that's so cute not to sound childish but its so cute!!!!!
Commented on the poem "Dying Wish" on 11/28/08 at 02:47 AM
i always thought you were supposed to go to the light but i think i'm understanding both sides more but she sounds sweet i definitely like this it was more on my level of understandind
Commented on the poem "In Nigritude" on 11/28/08 at 02:44 AM
okay truth be told the big words thru me for a loop but i get it like a little bit and i love the music not that i don't love the poem don't get me wrong it was a great write but i gotta get back at you for what it meant to me though i love the ripped and tore my innards now lies in wait part i think you tryna say you have a hidden anger inside but i liked it regardless ten stars
OMG i thought from the jump it was gonna be boring no offense but i couldn't stop reading it and i didn't until the end of coarse but i loved it cause in places it rhymed and others it didn't tne stars cause it showed exactly how i feel except for about the meds but i loved it ten stars great write