Commented on the poem "AIDS" on 03/18/09 at 08:25 PM
wow this was extremely emotional...but it was from your heart deep within and i can tell...we have hard times, especially in this world today when we have so many dangers running around and so much pain to feel...all we can really do is write about it, and that's a gift God gave to us...knowledge and literacy...10 starz here darling =)
very sweet poem here...it was relaxing, hopeful and very honest in its concept...it was clear and obscured at the same time...i loved the implied contradiction within this piece...great poetry here...10 starz...keep the pen flowing =)
Commented on the poem "Cold Poem" on 03/16/09 at 08:36 PM
nice...very creative and a very unique metaphor you used in this piece girl...definatly an exceptional piece of poetry and line rthym...we should collaborate
Commented on the poem "Instilled, Dear" on 03/16/09 at 08:19 PM
very enchanting and beautiful...the wordplay was perfect in its very essence...great piece here..keep the pen flowing =)
Commented on the poem "Feel" on 03/16/09 at 08:16 PM
awh...nice short, sweet simple peice here...definatly was a good one...i like the feel and the calm tone it reflected...definatly liking this right here...10 starz nothing less
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Commented on the poem "AIDS" on 03/18/09 at 08:25 PM
