Commented on the poem "Realies..." on 02/22/09 at 01:51 AM
truth...that's all i can say about it. what makes us so afraid?
Commented on the poem "Playing Taxi" on 02/22/09 at 01:03 AM
that's kinda messed up...why do ppl do things like that??? nice write, tho...
Commented on the poem "I'll Drive" on 02/22/09 at 12:22 AM
I can't drive...just wanted to put that out there. *clears throat* but um, this is like...everything I wish I could say...some of it I do. Very well phrased and so descriptive of what's REALLY going on. Love the driving metaphor and the vampire analogy. classically solid.
this poem gives me hope in life...people can go thru a lot in a lifetime and this reminds me that what i've been thru ain't shyt compared to some. so...thank you for staying strong and god is truly blessing you with this gift as well as in life (even if this story isn't true and if it is that's real talk). and thanks for the poem comment.
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Commented on the poem "Realies..." on 02/22/09 at 01:51 AM
