"Holding on to half of me so no one will have me whole heartedly", this line speaks volumes. This deserves recognition, as being the best poem I've read in a long while, thanks.
Commented on the poem "I wanna be" on 09/11/09 at 03:15 PM
THis is so refreshing to read and I could feel the realness and you holding out your hand, for him to take it. I love this song, one of my favorites.
I can't believe that I have over looked you fellow poet, this is a beautiful piece of art, I love music but it's the words that speak to my heart. 10 most def.
Commented on the poem "How do you know?" on 08/26/09 at 11:56 PM
This is a scribe that speaks volumes. I love the line where you say "To put your all into someone who will never see your worth", that's that line right there!.
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Commented on the poem "What Scares Me is You...(P O Challenge)" on 10/07/09 at 01:02 AM
