wow bro! it amaze me sumtimes how gifted u are you have a gift from god to be able to come up with metphors like you do & being able to put a story together off the top of your head like that is truly a gift from god my bro please dont take it for granted & use it for the glory of god! great piece i could actly see the lil girl as i read it keep it up!
POWERFUL PIECE KENYA, VERY POWERFUL INDEED I HAD TO CLAP AFTER READING THIS ONE RIGHT HERE. A MUST FOR ANY POET TO CHECK OUT AND THIS DEFINATELY A FAVORITE