Nickname:Jody Country:United States City:New York State:NY Gender:Female Age:24 Member Since:Nov 27, 2007 Last Login:Oct 06, 2008 Poems Submitted:186 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:2,392 Poem Views:11,312 Member Comments:775
Commented on the poem "Free..." on 10/05/08 at 02:14 PM
free fall, Syn, I'm feelin' that.
Commented on the poem "Broken Flowers" on 10/05/08 at 02:11 PM
the rose with the dew on it is absolutely beautiful. broken flowers, as long as you're a tulip... just come back stronger like you said, lesson learned ; ) music is really mellow and relaxing
Commented on the poem "Packing light" on 10/05/08 at 03:02 AM
what? can we say freeing? how do you leave shit behind? Is it because they charge you for more than 50lbs? lmao, I'm just kiddin', I'm the cheap one... lol, I packed 48 just to make sure... lol, but on the real I enjoyed the free-ness in this piece... the idea of just going somewhere w/out baggage is beyond beautiful, both literal and figurative... you rich, B, you didn't tell me that, first class an all... lmao... why can't you just fly coach like regular folk... plane get to the same destination.... lol, bump a warm towel and real food, eat the damn peanuts like everybody else... lol, I'm wildin' but like I said this trip or way to travel sounds lovely even with the idea of leaving him if he's going to be looking back, I feel you, now can I go to cheaptickets and see what I can find... lol. much love
Commented on the poem "Euripides" on 10/05/08 at 02:53 AM
true... for real. I'm a quiet person by nature, sometimes I just let the actions speak but common sense really isn't common. Euripides, I remember vaguely a story which had some really funny weird ass characters but a hell of a lot of good points... lol, I wanna pick your brain tho... I wanna know what inspires these... don't stop tho! lol
Commented on the poem "Robert Frost" on 10/05/08 at 02:46 AM
you are so right and this series, I'm telling you, I'm loving! (might have to get copies) the pieces with the quote work so well. it makes me think about the pieces I write to get stuff off my chest and then the pieces that I read that help me... beautiful once again my dear, lol