your work and beauty is an extraordinary package! It lifts up spirits real high...especially mine.
Commented on the poem "its over" on 10/05/09 at 10:57 AM
"applauding"....I am absolutely flawed by such compostion.
Commented on the poem "gotchu" on 10/05/09 at 10:51 AM
It just goes to show that relationships are a gamble and the stakes are real high; but if you're in love you're not afraid to continue reinvesting. If not, to lose it all is not worth it. It's a simple complexed phenomenon.
"applauding"...relationships are not a walk through the park...they are an investment and it hurts to see that it won't return. I guess that's the risk you take with love! Composed well and thought out considerably....
The human experience should humble us but often times we often do not realize what we have...you live life too easy and forget that struggles are apart of how we understand ourselves and other better. I could only imagine how much pain you've kept in your shelter...it would be hard to walk in your shoes but through this composition I understand that we shouldn't take anything for granted.
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Commented on the poem "dear admirers...(of mine)" on 11/06/09 at 12:19 AM
