Commented on the poem "Delicate Art" on 06/10/09 at 01:01 AM
Damn damn damn this was just WOW. from beginning to end, beautifully written. Well said. I love it love it love it. This is what keeps me inspired to keep my pen going. Keep it going. 10 strz n faved.
Commented on the poem "Falling" on 06/10/09 at 12:51 AM
This was beautifully written.. I hope all is well but from this poem im not sure. I can relate to this a lot. I felt like this when Sally passed away. I liked the line Its no longer feeling like im falling, but it just feels like im in the air stalling. nice. Keep your head up. Keep writing.
Commented on the poem "Scribble" on 03/14/09 at 02:51 PM
I hate when I start wonderin what went wrong, its like my mind won't be satisfied until I know exactly why. Good write I like this. keep scribblin on.. :)
This was a beautiful write I know he would be touched. Loss is definitely hard, I feel you on this one cuz I lost someone special to me as well, like a best friend to me. Keep this up and never lose sight of yourself. 10 stars.
Commented on the poem "Be real" on 03/12/09 at 03:44 PM
short and to the point, and still says so much within 6 lines. Nice.