Commented on the poem "They See" on 06/16/08 at 01:55 AM
You gotta perform this. Are you performing this? Your imagery, wordplay, conveys beautifully, tragically, what the streets are constantly try to say...I repeat. You gotta perform this.
Commented on the poem "She Feels..." on 06/15/08 at 02:14 AM
I agree with prophet, your wordplay was very entertaining. A moving piece that says a lot about commitment.
Commented on the poem "Faded Music" on 11/11/07 at 03:13 PM
I agree...the music we create with each other never dies, as long as the song inside us lives on....
Commented on the poem "Listen Closely" on 11/11/07 at 03:12 PM
It's often so hard to see, but those little clues do add up...to take someone who cares for granted is one of those things that will haunt a person forever in retrospect...
Commented on the poem "Cadillac Love" on 08/14/07 at 09:23 PM
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Commented on the poem "They See" on 06/16/08 at 01:55 AM
