i like this. the truhfullness and the realness that you displayed. alot of readers can relate to this piece which is what meakes in so intriguing. great job
Commented on the poem "TRY THIS" on 11/20/08 at 11:58 AM
i love the piece. love the thought and the emotion that went into it. love is major and you nailed it in this piece
Commented on the poem "Deep Trouble" on 11/20/08 at 11:50 AM
i love the realness and the truthfulness in whicj you have written this piece. a harsh reality come to life. great write
very spiritual and eye opening. a quality that you seem ti have perfected in your work. we need more writers like you. continue the masterful job that your doing
Commented on the poem "daddy" on 11/20/08 at 11:35 AM
i like this alot. a release of emotion and feeling that emanates throughout the piece. great job.